--- 1/draft-ietf-teas-yang-rsvp-14.txt	2020-09-03 20:13:13.735247571 -0700
+++ 2/draft-ietf-teas-yang-rsvp-15.txt	2020-09-03 20:13:13.823249797 -0700
@@ -1,24 +1,24 @@
 
 TEAS Working Group                                             V. Beeram
 Internet-Draft                                                   T. Saad
 Intended status: Standards Track                        Juniper Networks
-Expires: January 28, 2021                                      R. Gandhi
+Expires: March 7, 2021                                         R. Gandhi
                                                      Cisco Systems, Inc.
                                                                   X. Liu
                                                           Volta Networks
                                                               I. Bryskin
                                                               Individual
-                                                           July 27, 2020
+                                                      September 03, 2020
 
        A YANG Data Model for Resource Reservation Protocol (RSVP)
-                      draft-ietf-teas-yang-rsvp-14
+                      draft-ietf-teas-yang-rsvp-15
 
 Abstract
 
    This document defines a YANG data model for the configuration and
    management of RSVP Protocol.  The model covers the building blocks of
    the RSVP protocol that can be augmented and used by other RSVP
    extension models such as RSVP extensions to Traffic-Engineering
    (RSVP-TE).  The model is divided into base and extended modules that
    cover data for configuration, operational state, remote procedure
    calls, and event notifications.
@@ -31,21 +31,21 @@
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+   This Internet-Draft will expire on March 7, 2021.
 
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@@ -173,27 +173,27 @@
    protocol.  The support for RSVP extended features by all vendors is
    considered optional.  Such features are grouped in a separate RSVP
    extended module.
 
    The relationship between the base and RSVP extended YANG modules and
    the IETF routing YANG model is shown in Figure 1.
 
                    +--------------+
           Routing  | ietf-routing |
                    +--------------+
-                         o
+                         ^
                          |
                     +-----------+
      RSVP module    | ietf-rsvp |
                     +-----------+
-                         o
-                         |                    o: augment relationship
+                         ^
+                         |                    ^: augment relationship
      RSVP extended       |
        module       +--------------------+
                     | ietf-rsvp-extended |
                     +--------------------+
 
     Figure 1: Relationship of RSVP and RSVP extended modules with other
                              protocol modules
 
 3.2.  Design Considerations
 
@@ -223,22 +223,22 @@
 
 3.3.  Model Notifications
 
    Notifications data modeling is key in any defined data model.
 
    [RFC8639] and [RFC8641] define a subscription and push mechanism for
    YANG datastores.  This mechanism currently allows the user to:
 
    o  Subscribe notifications on a per client basis
 
-   o  Specify subtree filters or xpath filters so that only interested
-      contents will be sent.
+   o  Specify subtree filters [RFC6241] or xpath filters [RFC8639] so
+      that only interested contents will be sent.
 
    o  Specify either periodic or on-demand notifications.
 
 4.  RSVP Base YANG Model
 
    The RSVP base module defines the main building blocks for modeling
    the RSVP protocol and augments the IETF routing module.
 
 4.1.  Module Structure
 
@@ -2090,21 +2090,21 @@
    This document registers two YANG modules in the YANG Module Names
    registry [RFC6020].
 
       name:       ietf-rsvp
       namespace:  urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-rsvp
       prefix:     rsvp
       reference:  RFCXXXX
 
       name:       ietf-rsvp-extended
       namespace:  urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-rsvp-extended
-      prefix:     rsvp-extendeed
+      prefix:     rsvp-extended
       reference:  RFCXXXX
 
 7.  Security Considerations
 
    The YANG module specified in this document defines a schema for data
    that is designed to be accessed via network management protocols such
    as NETCONF [RFC6241] or RESTCONF [RFC8040].  The lowest NETCONF layer
    is the secure transport layer, and the mandatory-to-implement secure
    transport is Secure Shell (SSH) [RFC6242].  The lowest RESTCONF layer
    is HTTPS, and the mandatory-to-implement secure transport is TLS