--- 1/draft-ietf-manet-olsrv2-dat-metric-07.txt	2015-11-04 07:15:51.377351638 -0800
+++ 2/draft-ietf-manet-olsrv2-dat-metric-08.txt	2015-11-04 07:15:51.413352522 -0800
@@ -1,19 +1,19 @@
 
 MANET                                                           H. Rogge
 Internet-Draft                                           Fraunhofer FKIE
 Intended status: Experimental                                E. Baccelli
-Expires: May 5, 2016                                               INRIA
-                                                        November 2, 2015
+Expires: May 7, 2016                                               INRIA
+                                                        November 4, 2015
 
    Packet Sequence Number based directional airtime metric for OLSRv2
-                 draft-ietf-manet-olsrv2-dat-metric-07
+                 draft-ietf-manet-olsrv2-dat-metric-08
 
 Abstract
 
    This document specifies an directional airtime link metric for usage
    in OLSRv2.
 
 Status of This Memo
 
    This Internet-Draft is submitted in full conformance with the
    provisions of BCP 78 and BCP 79.
@@ -21,21 +21,21 @@
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-   This Internet-Draft will expire on May 5, 2016.
+   This Internet-Draft will expire on May 7, 2016.
 
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@@ -462,21 +462,21 @@
 
    o  an INTERVAL_TIME message TLV in each HELLO message, as defined in
       [RFC6130] section 4.3.2.
 
    o  an interface specific packet sequence number as defined in
       [RFC5444] section 5.1 which is incremented by 1 for each outgoing
       [RFC5444] packet on the interface.
 
    An implementation of OLSRv2 using the metric specified by this
    document that inserts packet sequence numbers in some, but not all
-   outgoing [RFC5444] packets will make this metric ignoring all packets
+   outgoing [RFC5444] packets will make this metric ignore all packets
    without the sequence number.  Putting the INTERVAL_TIME TLV into
    some, but not all Hello messages will make the timeout based loss
    detection slower.  This will only matter in the absence of packet
    sequence numbers.
 
 9.3.  Link Loss Data Gathering
 
    For each incoming [RFC5444] packet, additional processing SHOULD be
    carried out after the packet messages have been processed as
    specified in [RFC6130] and [RFC7181] as specified in this section.
@@ -769,27 +769,26 @@
    fluctuations regarding frame loss.  However, the current "quere of
    counters" algorithm suggested for DAT outperforms the binary queue
    algorithm and the exponential aging algorithms used for the ETX
    metric in the OLSR [RFC3626] codebase of Olsr.org.
 
 Appendix B.  OLSR.org metric history
 
    The Funkfeuer [FUNKFEUER] and Freifunk networks [FREIFUNK] are OLSR-
    based [RFC3626] or B.A.T.M.A.N.  [BATMAN] based wireless community
    networks with hundreds of routers in permanent operation.  The Vienna
-   Funkfeuer network in Austria, for instance, consists of 400
-   routerscovering the whole city of Vienna and beyond, spanning roughly
-   40km in diameter.  It has been in operation since 2003 and supplies
-   its users with Internet access.  A particularity of the Vienna
-   Funkfeuer network is that it manages to provide Internet access
-   through a city wide, large scale Wi-Fi MANET, with just a single
-   Internet uplink.
+   Funkfeuer network in Austria, for instance, consists of 400 routers
+   covering the whole city of Vienna and beyond, spanning roughly 40km
+   in diameter.  It has been in operation since 2003 and supplies its
+   users with Internet access.  A particularity of the Vienna Funkfeuer
+   network is that it manages to provide Internet access through a city
+   wide, large scale Wi-Fi MANET, with just a single Internet uplink.
 
    Operational experience of the OLSR project [OLSR.org] with these
    networks have revealed that the use of hop-count as routing metric
    leads to unsatisfactory network performance.  Experiments with the
    ETX metric [MOBICOM03] were therefore undertaken in parallel in the
    Berlin Freifunk network as well as in the Vienna Funkfeuer network in
    2004, and found satisfactory, i.e., sufficiently easy to implement
    and providing sufficiently good performance.  This metric has now
    been in operational use in these networks for several years.