--- 1/draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-44.txt	2019-04-29 14:13:13.178523256 -0700
+++ 2/draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-45.txt	2019-04-29 14:13:13.266525465 -0700
@@ -1,53 +1,53 @@
 
 IPWAVE Working Group                                          N. Benamar
 Internet-Draft                                  Moulay Ismail University
 Intended status: Standards Track                               J. Haerri
-Expires: October 25, 2019                                        Eurecom
+Expires: October 31, 2019                                        Eurecom
                                                                   J. Lee
                                                     Sangmyung University
                                                                 T. Ernst
                                                                   YoGoKo
-                                                          April 23, 2019
+                                                          April 29, 2019
 
 Transmission of IPv6 Packets over IEEE 802.11 Networks operating in mode
     Outside the Context of a Basic Service Set (IPv6-over-80211-OCB)
-                draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-44
+                draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-45
 
 Abstract
 
    In order to transmit IPv6 packets on IEEE 802.11 networks running
    outside the context of a basic service set (OCB, earlier "802.11p")
    there is a need to define a few parameters such as the supported
    Maximum Transmission Unit size on the 802.11-OCB link, the header
    format preceding the IPv6 header, the Type value within it, and
-   others.  This document describes these parameters for IPv6 and IEEE
-   802.11-OCB networks; it portrays the layering of IPv6 on 802.11-OCB
-   similarly to other known 802.11 and Ethernet layers - by using an
-   Ethernet Adaptation Layer.
+   others.  This document describes how IPv6 (including addressing and
+   basic ND) can be used to communicate among nodes in range of one
+   another over IEEE 802.11-OCB.  Optimizations and usage of IPv6 over
+   more complex scenarios is not covered and is subject of future work.
 
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-   This Internet-Draft will expire on October 25, 2019.
+   This Internet-Draft will expire on October 31, 2019.
 
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