--- 1/draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-35.txt	2019-04-08 08:13:10.530297841 -0700
+++ 2/draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-36.txt	2019-04-08 08:13:10.614300036 -0700
@@ -6,21 +6,21 @@
                                                                J. Haerri
                                                                  Eurecom
                                                                   J. Lee
                                                     Sangmyung University
                                                                 T. Ernst
                                                                   YoGoKo
                                                            April 8, 2019
 
 Transmission of IPv6 Packets over IEEE 802.11 Networks operating in mode
     Outside the Context of a Basic Service Set (IPv6-over-80211-OCB)
-                draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-35
+                draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-36
 
 Abstract
 
    In order to transmit IPv6 packets on IEEE 802.11 networks running
    outside the context of a basic service set (OCB, earlier "802.11p")
    there is a need to define a few parameters such as the supported
    Maximum Transmission Unit size on the 802.11-OCB link, the header
    format preceding the IPv6 header, the Type value within it, and
    others.  This document describes these parameters for IPv6 and IEEE
    802.11-OCB networks; it portrays the layering of IPv6 on 802.11-OCB
@@ -70,21 +70,21 @@
        4.2.1.  Ethernet Adaptation Layer . . . . . . . . . . . . . .   5
      4.3.  Link-Local Addresses  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .   7
      4.4.  Stateless Autoconfiguration . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .   7
      4.5.  Address Mapping . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .   8
        4.5.1.  Address Mapping -- Unicast  . . . . . . . . . . . . .   8
        4.5.2.  Address Mapping -- Multicast  . . . . . . . . . . . .   8
      4.6.  Subnet Structure  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .   8
    5.  Security Considerations . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .   9
      5.1.  Privacy Considerations  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  10
        5.1.1.  Privacy Risks of Meaningful info in Interface IDs . .  10
-     5.2.  MAC Address and Interface ID Generation . . . . . . . . .  11
+     5.2.  MAC Address and Interface ID Generation . . . . . . . . .  10
      5.3.  Pseudonym Handling  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  11
    6.  IANA Considerations . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  12
    7.  Contributors  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  12
    8.  Acknowledgements  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  12
    9.  References  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  13
      9.1.  Normative References  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  13
      9.2.  Informative References  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  15
    Appendix A.  ChangeLog  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  17
    Appendix B.  802.11p  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  27
    Appendix C.  Aspects introduced by the OCB mode to 802.11 . . . .  27
@@ -279,23 +279,20 @@
    There are several types of IPv6 addresses [RFC4291], [RFC4193], that
    MAY be assigned to an 802.11-OCB interface.  Among these types of
    addresses only the IPv6 link-local addresses MAY be formed using an
    EUI-64 identifier, in particular during transition time.
 
    If the IPv6 link-local address is formed using an EUI-64 identifier,
    then the mechanism of forming that address is the same mechanism as
    used to form an IPv6 link-local address on Ethernet links.  This
    mechanism is described in section 5 of [RFC2464].
 
-   For privacy, the link-local address MAY be formed according to the
-   mechanisms described in Section 5.2.
-
 4.4.  Stateless Autoconfiguration
 
    There are several types of IPv6 addresses [RFC4291], [RFC4193], that
    MAY be assigned to an 802.11-OCB interface.  This section describes
    the formation of Interface Identifiers for IPv6 addresses of type
    'Global' or 'Unique Local'.  For Interface Identifiers for IPv6
    address of type 'Link-Local' see Section 4.3.
 
    The Interface Identifier for an 802.11-OCB interface is formed using
    the same rules as the Interface Identifier for an Ethernet interface;
@@ -766,20 +763,23 @@
               document freely available at URL
               http://standards.ieee.org/getieee802/
               download/802.11p-2010.pdf retrieved on September 20th,
               2013.".
 
 Appendix A.  ChangeLog
 
    The changes are listed in reverse chronological order, most recent
    changes appearing at the top of the list.
 
+   -36: removed a phrase about the IID formation and MAC generation, but
+   left in the section 5.2 that describes how it happens.
+
    -35: addressing the the intarea review: clarified a small apparent
    contradiction between two parts of text that use the old MAC-based
    IIDs (clarified by using qualifiers from each other: transition time,
    and ll addresses); sequenced closer the LL and Stateless Autoconf
    sections, instead of spacing them; shortened the paragraph of Opaque
    IIDs; moved the privacy risks of in-clear IIDs in the security
    section; removed a short phrase duplicating the idea of privacy
    risks; added third time a reference to the 802.11-2016 document; used
    'the hidden terminal' text; updated the Terminology section with new
    BCP-14 text 'MUST' to include RFC8174.